Honestly I really enjoy this piece. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who went the lineless route. I'm not abnormal anymore! Yay! xD
That said, 2 things that are making this piece not a 5 stars for me. 1st: it is your ghost. I get what you're trying to do. I really do. I tried doing it this way too but I found that I couldn't get her read well. If not for the fact that I know there is supposed to a ghost floating in the scene I wouldn't even notice her in your work. She blends in too much to your background. Your WIP has this effect working better because the background is darker and she is lighter. It works albeit it's slight.
2nd: there's this random arrow like artifact in the bottom right of the piece that just makes me think "did you just not finish?"
Overall I really like this. You were bold enough to take a route I turned away from. I commend you good sir! Good luck!