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Honestly I really enjoy this piece. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who went the lineless route. I'm not abnormal anymore! Yay! xD

That said, 2 things that are making this piece not a 5 stars for me. 1st: it is your ghost. I get what you're trying to do. I really do. I tried doing it this way too but I found that I couldn't get her read well. If not for the fact that I know there is supposed to a ghost floating in the scene I wouldn't even notice her in your work. She blends in too much to your background. Your WIP has this effect working better because the background is darker and she is lighter. It works albeit it's slight.

2nd: there's this random arrow like artifact in the bottom right of the piece that just makes me think "did you just not finish?"

Overall I really like this. You were bold enough to take a route I turned away from. I commend you good sir! Good luck!

AndresDres93 responds:

Hey! Thank you very much for your review! I get what you are saying about the ghost and I think it is a pretty valid criticism and I will take it into consideration for future pieces. The arrow like thingy on the bottom right is actually my personal logo :D
Thanks again for your review, man! Btw, I saw your entry a while ago and it's pretty amazing. Good luck to you too :D

Your Mega Man is adorable! zomg! I love him! xD

Your image as a whole is well done. My biggest suggestion is to try not to use black for shadows. Find another color as close to black as you can without it being black. Think of it this way, if something is black it means there is no light there and if there is no light you can't see it. We as an audience want to see everything as much as possible. Also not using black brightens the image and gives it life. Try it next time!

Still love your Mega Man! guwaaah!

ShaquilleSaddler responds:

Thanks! I actually was looking at this for a while and trying to figure out what looked weird and that was it. The weird thing is I know that black rule, oh well, ill definitely keep it in mind next time.

If this is with a bum wrist color me impressed.

This is more just plain curiosity but if the date of this story is Dec 24th 2075 and it's the 50th anniversary of the defeat of Krumpus... why at the time of the taking of this photo (our future 12/24/2025) have we gone back to black and white Polaroid photography? xD

Still really cool and do wish the best both in the contest and wrist recovery!4

mlillustration responds:

hahaha Thank you. Yeah, weirdly enough, I wrestled with that whole camera bit as well. I was originally going for a poloroid type of camera, but then I remembered that I didn't have a square :P

And thanks for the well wishes. Good luck on the competition as well.

Just a simple artist who taught himself how to draw, learned to paint and discovered that the answer to Life, the Universe and everything is 42.

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